Put it down as just me Rhyfka, but I can't abide poems called things like
"Infinity". The poem itself is great. Could there be another title possible.
bw
James
>From: Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: New: Infinity
>Date: Mon, 24 Jun 2002 12:54:09 EDT
>
>Infinity
>
>as below so above
>
>The Yucca spill their milky blooms
>A single beer bottle stays sentinel
>on patio ledge Doves serenade
>Grandma waves her rattles
>dances her Kiowa healing
>My child's fever breaks His appetite
>
>returns Sister bakes
>a cake Desert winds shout
>Our ancestors celebrate
>We chant long
>ago words Spirits rise
>as feathers winging toward infinity
>
>as above so below
>
>Ryfkah 6/24/02
bw
James
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