Thank you Sally,
yes long windedness on too narrow a subject, perhaps? May be best to leave
it lie for a time, then get out the pruning shears. I'd hoped for a little
pathos in the ned but it may not have come through, so I'll review that too.
Cheers and thansk, glad you found your way to the piece.
Frank
> >Rabbits! A bit to much of a good thing for me, Frank. I thought some
>ofthe
>stanzas might have made a poem in themselves eg. stanza 2 but I was rather
>sorry for the bunnies and there seemed to be so many of them - that's the
>main effect the length of the poem had for me. Strong writing in itself but
>the subject matter seems not to progress to a conclusion. I'm glad you
>weren't any crueller. Sally-ee
> >
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