In a message dated 06/22/2002 3:05:58 PM Central Daylight Time,
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<< Before The Last Bus For Alston
After watching the shoving we heard the first punch.
Then his hood came down, the beard came off,
and his red coat ripped when one, a Tyneside Roman,
grabbed him, head-butted him twice. Then he slumped,
just lay there as the kicking began. It was Auden.
*Nowt changes for ye, does it? Now be telled.*
Then his sack was up-ended and they crouched down,
shook then pocketed some parcels, swapped others,
but the large one wouldn’t fit under anyone’s coat.
Laughter, until the smallest, dressed as Franco, looked up
and, grinning, came over to me. *Take it,* he hissed.
It was thick gold paper with a red ribbon, and heavy.
He waits. I smell his beer. The bus doors swish open.
I don’t refuse. How can I. It’s Christmas.
Bob Cooper
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It is good to see some of your work. Seems that it has been a long time. I
enjoy the humor: i.e., Father Christmas as Auden plus the modern day mugging.
I am not quite sure what Franco is doing here, but that is okay. I am
wondering though why you switched from past tense to present tense in the
last two lines? Did you mean to do that? Clever poem. Sue
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