Thank you.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 6/20/02 1:09:58 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< Hi Ryfkah,
I like this very much. The way you express the continuous rush of the tide
with the refrain is a delight. I like too how we come into the poem with the
refrain and "and" as if we are entering a continuous process. A terrific
atmosphere is created here.
bw
James
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