Hi Arthur,
Could be, though I thought they had fifteen syllables and one space in a
line. Not being an expert I'd accept them as they are.
bw
James
>From: Arthur <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Zips or not??
>Date: Tue, 1 Jan 2002 14:14:38 -0000
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> #1
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>king pike glum and bony maw
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>gawps imperious waft bud bits swirl
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> #2
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> robin glows tosses frozen crusts
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> deep slow fingers prise and lever
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> #3
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>ale-hued river over weir spume scuds
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> I pour a glass of Chardonnay nitric clarities wink
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> #4
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>sickle-winged hawk black blade folds
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> delivers death silence in the meadow
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>
bw
James
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