what a delightful insult, poor God, how depressing for him
I'm not sure you need the last line, though
P-P, thanks. I agree, I cut it off from the main poem, but left it on the
page to consider the error of its ways.
I'm not really insulting God though, more like exploring things that may pop
up in a more serious bit later.
Gary
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