Remarkable ending especially the final simile; I like the straightforward
narrative of your poem...good story...good poetry.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
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<< When people say, "Really?",
she replies that it is not a fact
but in every other respect, it is
completely true.Then she smiles
like a slice of lemon. >>
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