Everyone who commented on Red, thank you for the help and kind words.
Mary, you are the best reader ever. I the sloppy proof reader should have
posted a better version. There is a new one at
http://www.wildpoetryforum.com/cgi-bin/discus/show.cgi?467/8819 which has
the errors fixed but still needs some work. Esp thanks for catching the
Green Mile. I will change that to something not so near.
Sue, walnuts it is. And I will quit being lazy and go look up a Lousiana
River. Thought I could get away with a made up name.
Per, Terri, Arthur, Ryfsis, Jayne, Sally-ee. Smiles.
As I post these, please remember this is a novel (novetry?) and the works
may not stand alone.
Gary
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Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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