Your poem is webbed with allusions, Ryfkah

is faut pas (excuse my ignorance if not) an allusion to faux pas, whilst
meaning something like needs/must not?

The richness of sea foam in a dessicated, sandy wasteland - such poverty

there is much to be found here

P-P


>From: Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
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>Subject: New Sub.: Wicket #20/Searching for Cain
>Date: Sun, 6 Jan 2002 20:40:25 EST
>
>Wicket #20/Searching for Cain
>
>Marked by divorce
>a Scarlet D
>he yearns only to be loved
>authentically esteemed
>
>He drifts into exile
>a molecule of sand
>shifting in a great wasteland
>roams…roves some more
>
>We hail him Wandering Jew
>Great Spirit Father
>Enoch the Angel
>Master of Faut Pas
>
>He forfeits sisters  brothers
>searches for family long left behind
>embraces the homeless
>the war-stricken  the lost
>
>He is friend to many
>Many befriend him
>a  poet who spews as rich sea foam
>in the wilderness
>
>Called home
>he is embraced
>a warrior of life's happening
>beyond lesser gods  a survivor
>
>Ryfkah 1/6/02




Perpetua Pullman


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