me hale and chilled, he reduced by his Gethsemane
to an irregular hexagon of pine and a long night alone.
Frost is predicted.
Arthur, fine work. But I wish for the last line to move in to under pine as
above.
Thanks.
Gary
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Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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