In a message dated 4/10/02 8:27:36 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< I am surrounded by a thousand shades of green:
jade, forest, sage, emerald among those with names. >>
Do you need to say thousand shades of green then name them? Maybe skip of
green. Anyhow like the Faberge ending. The words could be bared down a bit
in this one and be more effective.
kol tuv, Ryfsis
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