Hi Arthur,
Your use of tercet stanzas really works well with the natural images in
this. Beautiful, I like it very much.
CW, Mary :O)
--- Arthur <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Leafmould
>
> Sea mews trail their cries
> along the smoking line of surf
> where moon bids and seas obey.
>
> Beside a mound, a shadow among shades
> remembers the woods and the trees' hush swept
> by a wind that rose like a song from the waves.
>
> There, in Eden-light, under an April moon,
> they rutted, locked like pale deer,
> and woke chilled, gilded by morning light.
>
> Beyond this silence the gull calls and sea stags leap.
> Where leaves rot like promises, he lays memories,
> wonders, will these few flowers suffice?
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