A remarkable piece of work! It must be a hybrid form of poetry you're
developing between prose/poetry/short story/narrative. I love it! I hope
you're planning on sending this one out? <hint,hint>
Mary, actually except for threading Steinbeck's words into the work, it is
fairly straight forward narrative with the use of only full stops borrowed
from G. Stein. It took several tries to get here. As for submitting. ?
There is a zine I'm trying to break into, maybe this is weird enough for
them.
Thanks.
Gary
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