And this is my last reply. I like the rounded feel created by the first and
last line. There's a certain profundity in apparent nonsense - rather how
Eliot can come over. Great stuff Sally. Sorry I can't make Edinburgh this
time but I'll nae doot be in touch.
bw
James
>From: Sally Evans <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Hyperpoem: and how should I presume
>Date: Tue, 26 Mar 2002 23:36:57 +0000
>
>This is my final line for the hyperpoem.
>
>
>
>And how should I presume
>to ask you to make room
>
>to read my rhyming screed
>it is a wicked deed
>
>and how should I explain
>that when rhyme takes the rein
>
>it drags you where it wants
>and bees and elephants
>
>with matters great and small
>throng careless in its hall
>
>and should I not despair
>of getting anywhere
>
>away from all this gloom
>and how should I presume?
>
>
>Sally Evans
bw
James
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