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Re: New sub: Another Bloody Spring
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Sue Scalf <[log in to unmask]>
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The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
Date:
Sun, 24 Mar 2002 12:33:02 EST
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As to adding "these," I would not. Your poem would be bogged down in those breasts jiggling. To clarify, you might rephrase the line about the breasts and just say "newly formed." I love the poem.
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