This is a lovely poem. Just a few quibs for possible polishes. I've done
them on the text. Do you need to ask questions in the poem?
bw
James
Thanks much for the suggestions. The questions: This is part of a set of
poems and those refer back to threads which have ran through the set, esp
the willows and roses. To a degree, although stand alone poems, this is one
long perhaps never ending work.
Gary
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