I really like this Gary like the way you do weave in and out of the prose.
You capture the way women are bound very accurately. The way they are bound
to their men, their homes, their children. You show them having loyalty and
love for their homes and family and also great patience and optimism. SallyJ
Sally, thanks. This kind of prose-poem is risky. I'm re-ordering my files
and find narratives all over the joint.
BTW, if you get a chance read the first two paras of Grapes. The finest
poem you might read.
Gary
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