Yes John,
Focus has been a problem for the last little while - not enough room in my
head for clear thinking. This piece was probbaly the best of the pieces I've
attempted over the past several weeks, but leaves quite some room for
revision. I shall try when I can.
Cheers and thanks,
Frank
>Hi Frank, this seems curiously unfocussed by your standards. Maybe I've
>been fifteensyllabling up my own outback for too long but it's as though
>there's not a tight enough image selection - the cam-corder syndrome.
>
>For some strange reason the thought of a future tense construction for part
>three also keeps nagging at me.
>
>'Sabres' eh? It wasn't the Maori fleet was it - I hear relations are a bit
>strained in the colonies.
>
>best wishes, John
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