Hi Arthur,
I think there is a name for the mid-line ga - someone used it (maybe Jim) on
a previous occasion when I was going overboard with them.
It's very much a snapshot and very much journal entry style, as you point
out. It will be edited, but I doubt there will be major changes to format -
movement of some ings and such like alteration, mainly.
At a personal level I think that journal-entry style you mentioned probably
suits my work - little pictures of small events.
Cheers, and thanks.
Frank
>Frank, I like this very much, but cannot help feeling this is a poem in
>motion towards itself and we are viewing a snapshot of that movement
>towards
>what it will eventually become. It reads like instant journal entry at the
>moment. Lines in a sketchbook. Terri's comments are all valid. I am a fan
>of
>the mid line " gap" . Does that have a name? I am working with it myself
>occasionally. I use it as a silence above words, if that makes sense. If I
>am correct and this is a first draft then I look forward to the finished
>article.Regards Arthur
The Tales of Faust poetry page can be found at:
http://www.hotkey.net.au/~flp/F_index.htm
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