mary, you've caught me out. I really should have done a syllable count, but
am a little lazy, and a lot pressured. I need to either rewrite it in more
straightforward manner, or do the proper thing with a count. It'll have to
wait awhile, I think, but eventually it will nag me back to seek a remedy.
Cheers,
Frank
>Hi Frank,
>
>Beautiful sentiment, and no overly mushy - well done! I have a lot of
>trouble with the last line of S1 though, and some of the lines are really,
>really long, actually, I started counting syllables thinking this might be
>a particular form since the 2nd line of each stanza seems to be equally
>long and then others seem to parallel as well...but that's not it! lol
>I've so often wanted to learn to play the piano, but don't seem to have
>the discipline. I envy those who can...wonderful poem.
>
>CW, Mary :O)
The Tales of Faust poetry page can be found at:
http://www.hotkey.net.au/~flp/F_index.htm
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