Hi Frank,
Beautiful sentiment, and no overly mushy - well done! I have a lot of
trouble with the last line of S1 though, and some of the lines are really,
really long, actually, I started counting syllables thinking this might be
a particular form since the 2nd line of each stanza seems to be equally
long and then others seem to parallel as well...but that's not it! lol
I've so often wanted to learn to play the piano, but don't seem to have
the discipline. I envy those who can...wonderful poem.
CW, Mary :O)
--- Frank Faust <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> he writes like a composer
> his fingers move across the keys to put words up on a page
> like pressing chords
> trying to shape a music that will carry
> a reader away
> lost inside little story tales
> between the pounding of drama
> or a tinkle of love soft in the words broken
> by narration that can't speak the language too well
> perhaps from a foreign land
> he make music word so best he can
>
> he is always writing a solo
> but he tries to embrace the orchestration of the life that he leads
> by writing it for you
> telling tales of the places and moments
> the things he sees
> tiny sonatas in stanza form
> variations moving from thought
> through his fingers to screen then to paper
> passed to you for inspection to tell what you read
> did he write a good story
> does the music play inside your head
> when he writes like a composer?
>
> ~
>
> Frank
>
> The Tales of Faust poetry page can be found at:
> http://www.hotkey.net.au/~flp/F_index.htm
>
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