Shalom Frank
You are welcome.You are the god of your poem; you must do what you will which
is what must be.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 3/10/02 3:23:01 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< Thanks to everyone for comments on this piece - still some work to do and
Ryfkah, thank you particularly for picking some obvious flaws. Not sure
about chopping opening and last lines - I'll give more thought.
Someone asked if I am musical. The answer is no, but I had this little
vision of someone playing a musical keyboard to produce poetry with music
inside it - storyline secondary to the music. That's what I was trying to
reflect in the piece.
Cheers,
Frank >>
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