I changed Sixpence to pense as a double meaning....don't know what the group
will end up calling it. The end of the dialogue is near...#118 is to be a
group expression.
Thank you.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 1/6/02 10:15:16 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< Fascinating title ( shold it be sixpence with a c?). Interesting how
colours
nudge their way into each strophe. The broken diction adds powerfuly to the
slightly dreamlike almost nightmarish display of imagery. Good one Ryfkah. >>
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