I would separate the rhymed couplets. Like the sound and rhythm here.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
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<< For Spike Milligan
Ah, Spike, for prince or goon,
Death always knocks too soon.
I know you struggled with the dark
but through the glooms, the spark
of genius was always there
to blaze into a comic flare.
Good luck,old lad, in what comes after,
for now I mourn you with fond laughter.
grasshopper >>
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