Care to launch a joint venture?
>Jill Jones wrote:
>>
>> Influences
>>
>> Spent the night talking
>> commercial design, diaries
>> “shaky out-of-focus 16mm movies”.
>> Master of the wig
>> “wrapped away from the world”
>> shadowy world, primary domain.
>> Ultimately he would let go -
>> “Billboard Promised Land”.
>>
>> Liked to stand back with Desire
>> large and uninhibited
>> then a tight close-up, eye less coy
>> couch performing acts, an on-screen erection
>> the influence seems unmistakable.
>>
>> Already on the curriculum
>> the young man with a camera
>> later to reassess the cluster of names
>> the necessary precursors - semen as wisdom
>> succession of the holy spirits.
>> as difficult as that of any siblings
>> threatened to blow their cover.
>>
>> About semblance in some ways gladly unresolved
>> never really determined
>> in or out trajectory
>> art stardom as a swish affair.
>>
>> “Khakis in barns!” To be like a master
>> homage with spirits
>> with soul, with intelligence
>> a miniature world
>> “worth inherent in everything”.
>>
>> Search for dross
>> “they can be joined and made one”
>> piss on metal, absence of anything more
>> “fanatical as a menagerie”
>> the empty chair, a belief in resurrection.
>>
>> Projected, superimposed
>> “a hubristic compendium and enclosure”
>> look, then look again, sheer surface
>> a blank flickering blue screen.
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>This one is excellent, though the repetition of "spirits" boths me -
>second stanza with it could be condensed, I think.
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