nice one
strong opening
I like the first two lines
and the last
Claire
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> I stood with you at your grave,
> watching the rain erase your name from the stone.
> Your damp face scanned the sky for a trace of your days
> as the mournful ghosts huddled round,
> sobbing into their shawls of fog. You laid
> a handful of thorns on the mound where the grass grew black.
> Your eyes were empty of anger. Your eyes were empty
> of expectation. Your eyes were empty of fulfillment.
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