Mmm, like that too. Not sure which one I prefer. This version is more
direct and threatening.
bw
c
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> blissful fish in sunlit shadows
> oh beware the heron strikes
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>
> OK then, how's about this? J
>
>
> I've a definite preference for the second version, J. I think you need a
> pause after blissful fish otherwise it becomes too much of a mouthful. It
> looks more elegant too.
> bw
> c
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> >
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> > zip #138
> >
> > blissful fish in sunlit shadows oh beware
> > the heron strikes
> >
> > 0r
> >
> > blissful fish in sunlit shadows
> > oh beware the heron strikes
> >
> >
> > Both these layouts should be reading on your screen with the caesurae
> > (triple spaces) centred. Any comments on the alternatives much
> appreciated.
> > Or anything else for that matter! Thanks. John
> >
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