Thanks for comments and thoughts gentleman. I'll have to give the piece a
good shake out. John I'd noted the repeated phrase you mentioned and have
despatched it. James - the way the lines ended was a product of trying to
get a reasonable flow, but I'll go back through it and see what will tweak.
many thanks,
Frank
The Tales of Faust poetry page can be found at:
http://www.hotkey.net.au/~flp/F_index.htm
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