Hi John,
This zip didn't work quite so well for me. I think there is a little
confusion (for me) between the reference to 'fall louder' and the title of
'crunching'. crunching obviously works and is the point, but I felt a little
lost with the notion of falling and trying to fix sound to it - it's perhaps
too active for me (fall versus fallen, perhaps?)
Anyway, thanks again,
Frank
The Tales of Faust poetry page can be found at:
http://www.hotkey.net.au/~flp/F_index.htm
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> crunching up and down
> the autumn leaves fall louder than my feet
>
>John
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