this reads like at times like a lamentation in its use of rhetoric, and a
psalm in mosts of
its constructions.
Sally, yes, a lamentation. Much closer to what I wanted to do. I've
changed the title to reflect.
I often change form in mid-poem as here.
Thanks.
Gary
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