In a message dated 9/24/01 8:20:55 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
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Vibrant in saris
close-veiled
against impertinent dust [I connect to the visual writing in this
stanza]
they swing for miles
through a dry landscape
track down water
fill huge, ungainly drums
which others mount
to their receptive heads
and elegantly
turn home again
Drought deferred [good twist of message]
kol tuv, Ryfkah
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