Hi Sally - I saw that too and had to laugh. Wonderful world we live in
sometimes.
My day is just beginning and it's off to work for me, whereas yours must be
on the wane.
Good night to you and to anyone else about to shut down the system foir the
night.
Cheers,
Frank
The Tales of Faust poetry page can be found at:
http://www.hotkey.net.au/~flp/F_index.htm
>From: Sally James <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: sub: "yellow ribbons" - furhter thought
>Date: Thu, 27 Sep 2001 22:40:27 +0100
>
>Hi Frank. Guess we must be reading this poem thousands of miles apart at
>the same time. Modern technology eh. I thought two people from opposite
>sides of the world communicating with different responses to a poem. No
>harm in this, in fact I think it is pretty brilliant. Best wishes Sally
>
>----- Original Message -----
>From: Frank Faust
>Sent: 27 September 2001 22:35
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: sub: "yellow ribbons" - furhter thought
>
>Perhaps the zip would work better as an introduction - like an opening
>quotation - to a piece that covers all the ground you wish to with the
>poem/subject. Just a thought.
>
>Frank
>
>The Tales of Faust poetry page can be found at:
>http://www.hotkey.net.au/~flp/F_index.htm
>
>
> >I thought I'd experiment and add my zip to the end of this. What do you
> >think?
> >Terrie
> >
> >yellow ribbons
> >
> >people gather down the lane
> >their newspapers and coffee cups held in delicate balance
> >the sky, a cloudless blue, so peaceful without planes flying overhead
> >underneath the shade of Jacarandas sans blooms
> >an old dog lolls its head by a water bowl
> >
> >on the trees yellow ribbons
> > curious a child touches them
>
>
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