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blissful fish in sunlit shadows
oh beware the heron strikes
OK then, how's about this? J
I've a definite preference for the second version, J. I think you need a
pause after blissful fish otherwise it becomes too much of a mouthful. It
looks more elegant too.
bw
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> zip #138
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> blissful fish in sunlit shadows oh beware
> the heron strikes
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> 0r
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> blissful fish in sunlit shadows
> oh beware the heron strikes
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> Both these layouts should be reading on your screen with the caesurae
> (triple spaces) centred. Any comments on the alternatives much
appreciated.
> Or anything else for that matter! Thanks. John
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