I'm not sure why, but this seems to have gone straight to Bunny rather than
the list.  Since there's a hint meant for someone else in it, I'll repost
it.
bw
c


> Mmmm...  I have the same problem.  It's easy to see where they don't work
> (for me) but a different kettle of fish to tell you why.  I think I'll
leave
> it to people who know what they're talking about to answer this one.  John
> Carley's very good (hint, hint)...
> bw
> c
>
>
> > Hi there,
> >
> > thanks for looking at the poem. I'm still pretty much a novice at this
and
> > I break my lines pretty much where it feels right to me. Apart from
> obvious
> > no-nos like prepositions or articles at the end of a line, no one has
been
> > able to give me much advice about this.
> >
> > If you have any, I'd love to have it :)
> >
> > Bunny
> > "Sometimes a poem about a fish is just that - a poem about a fish."
> >
> >
>