Thanks for your appreciation Gary. I agree it could
be shortened.bw, cara
--- garydawg <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > Outside
> the thunder breaks, clashes and claps.
>
> The sleepers stir.
>
> Later they will begin to dream again.
>
>
> Cara, fine work, though I might end on claps, maybe
> stirs.
>
> Thanks.
>
> Gary
>
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