You are right Ryfkah, it is a marker only. I think I've probably got the
right phrase but I'll let it stew for a day or so.
Thanks, John
----- Original Message -----
From: "Ryfkah *" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: 05 September 2001 05:13
Subject: Re: the endless sea
Shalom John
I really got sapped once for using endless sea; you might reconsider. I
like
the message and tone of your poem.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 9/4/01 5:08:08 PM, [log in to unmask]
writes:
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the endless sea erased by cloud
and simple men just vanish >>
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