In a message dated 9/1/01 8:38:40 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:

<< An incident on the line  [makes the reader want to know the incident]


You stayed in the hotel

I went shopping

jellybeans and jewellery [jewelry or is this OK?  Like sound of jelly beans &
jewelry]

my two favourite things


Two hours I waited for a train

"an incident on the line"

time spent eating jellybeans

savouring thoughts of our evening


you in your nude and me in my gold  [great vision]

supper first, then more champagne

a happy anniversary for you and me

I should have got a taxi


but I waited for that train

after a fifteen minute journey

I was back at the hotel

you wasn't there  [weren't?]


I took bath and washed my hair

desperate to know where you were

several hours later, the policeman said

"an incident on the line" >>  [what a tragedy!]

Thanks for the  so very human narrative.

kol tuv, Ryfkah