Dear Bunny,
Love the last three lines. For me, they form a complete poem and you don't
need the rest of it.
bw
Laura
----- Original Message -----
From: Lynn Owen <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Saturday, August 25, 2001 9:48 PM
Subject: Re: sub: On Purification
> Me too!
> Stay with it and let it lead you.
> That's what I think.
> Lynn
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Bunny Goodjohn" <[log in to unmask]>
> To: <[log in to unmask]>
> Sent: Saturday, August 25, 2001 12:08 AM
> Subject: sub: On Purification
>
>
> > Hi all,
> >
> > Playing with some fun stuff. Direction on where to go would be
> appreciated.
> >
> > On Purification or "Hello Merlot"
> >
> > Don't want to be saved--
> > wanna be depraved
> > want my weakly fill
> > of uniquely
> > non-herbal,
> > alcoholic drink
> > the missing link between real
> > and how I feel
> > on spending days
> > sober
> > yet crazed
> > in a daze.
> >
> > So long, Souchong
> > bring it on
> > Sauvignon.
> >
> > Bunny
> > "Sometimes a poem about a fish is just that - a poem about a fish."
>
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