I think this is lovely.  Very tender, passionate and poignant. Not sure
about the repetition of 'tits' and wonder whether 'you grown' should read
'you groan' and 'you hand clawing at my tits' should read 'your hand...'?
bw
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> Hi
>
> A poem to introduce myself - C&c welcome - this is an adult poem so if
that
> is not your thing don't read on.
>
> Louise
>
>
>
>
> first time
>
> for the first time
> you open up your legs for me
> and with skirt pulled back
> let me smell and suck your
> knickers and your crotch
>
> this is like my first time
> and I don't know what to expect
> as I roll across a mirror
> of my body
> reach up into your T-shirt
> see my hands
> like naked puppets
> reach your tits
> and I wonder what they will feel like
>
> Your baby bra eases up
> but I hate that when boys grope me
> strangle me with pulled up cups
> I reach round and open it
> and your little tits fall free
> nipples growing under my fingers
>
> you pull me up
> face to face again
> kiss and lick me
> I reach down and feel the wetness
> of your pants
> I can smell you on my hands
> my middle finger finds a way into you
> wet and supple
> you grown and then I feel it
> you hand clawing at my tits
> then down undoing my jeans
> pushing them down
> now your hand in my pants
> through my hair
> and I explode as fingers lightly brush clitoris
>
>
> not like the boys who
> pull and pant this is gentle
> and I want to come for you
> and make you come for me
>
> and you can smell yourself
> on my mouth
> as you lick and shriek and cannot stop
> I don't want you to ever stop
>
> and now all the words like fuck
> and cunt and tit and shag are something
> used with men and this is
> something new and needs new words
> some would want to label it
> and me and her
> but this defies labels
> except this is love
> and gender is irrelevant
>
> juice drains from us
> as we hold each other
> waiting for the moment
> when time starts up again
>