Marilyn, Thanks for your appreciation. I think your
confusion stems from thefact that it should have been
'he' in the first line. I'm so sorry: it's thrown the
poem for everyone. (It could have been 'she' but then
the pronouns that followed would have been different.
cheers, cara
--- Marilyn Injeyan <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > In a
message dated 8/17/01 11:11:30 AM Pacific
> Daylight Time,
> [log in to unmask] writes:
>
>
> Cara, i like the metaphor of colors to define the
> couple's relationship.
> Succinctly
> done. Thanks.
>
> Marilyn
>
>
>
> > Internal Design
> >
> >
> >
> > 'Blue' she said
> > as though there was
> > no room for further discussion.
> > 'Yellow' she said
> > prepared to argue the case
> > for saffron rather than ochre.
> > 'Green' said their best friend
> > as she thought
> > of the colour wheel,
> > seascapes,
> > her favoured political party.
> > He was damned (I get
> confused her as to who the
> > "he" is -
> > if he was going to see the
> friend or the
> > husband/boyfriend)
> > green as blue:
> > she certainly could not see it
> > as saffron.
> >
> > They continued to live
> > with the magnolia and cream
> > chosen by the previous owner
> >
> > as though each of them sensed
> >
>
>
>
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