I'm a Science teacher; probably know a bit more than some.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 8/16/01 5:18:47 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< Hi Ryfkh - my treatment of planets, moons and stars is a bit cavalier and
flawed - I need to do better astronomy or perhaps stay away - I used them
only because the notion of captivity - moon/planet around star - seemed a
different take on the theme. I'm not happy with it.
Thanks for the thoughtful comments - I'm unsure whether to try to expand and
put more story in as well as correct, or just correct and let it lie.
decisions, decisions LOL
Cheers,
Frank >>
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