I see the light that glows
on vunerable skin, and from within.
Will the world give him time
for Time? I ask.
Cara, good work. However I am confused as to his age. At first I thought a
babe, then a lad, thn perhaps a bit older. Teen? Now, old but challenged?
Could be clearer.
Thanks.
Gary
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