LOL
Yeah, I guess I'm gettin myself ready for cronehood...
lol CW, Mary :O)
--- tlrelf <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> You and your ol' crones! I can see her on the floor scrubbin' away and
> wonderin' what's up. Around and around, trying to clean away the
> discursive
> wonderings to get at the truth, but there's always a smudge in the way!
> Terrie
>
> > Here's the second...a bit of a stretch.
> >
> > C&C welcome.
> >
> > ~*~
> >
> > Hunger Blues
> >
> >
> > I got me the idea that I owe someone
> > You know I got me this idea like I owe someone
> > Now I'm down on my knees, I'm a'scrubbin ol' crone
> > it's a dirty ol' job that ain't never gets done [how about "don't
> never
> get done"?]
> > and I got me this idea like I owe someone
> >
> > I got me a notion that I need someone
> > I say I got me a notion like I need someone
> > Now I woke up this mornin, my belly to bone
> > and it's always a'gnawin, won't leave me alone
> > Said it gives me this notion like I done need someone {don't or do
> need?
> This use of "done" doesn't work as well for me as the last line does]
> >
> > I got me the feelin that I hurt someone
> > Now I got me this feelin like I hurt someone
> > Now I beg God Almighty, I cry and I moan
> > I'm a'prayin Sweet Jesus that you ain't the one
> > 'cause I got me this feelin like I done hurt someone
> >
> > ~*~
> >
> > Cheerwell, Mary :O)
> >
> >
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> > Good Cheer & Be Well,
> > Maryann Hazen-Stearns
> > "Under The Limbo Stick"
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> >
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