Given that you are not using any direct juxtaposition the poem risks being
straight evocation of a single image-set in the form,
'statement/illustration'.
John, seems to be the major problem I have, among a lot of lessor issues.
Maybe:
memories of simpler gifts
mixed nuts no nutcracker
Thanks
Gary
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