Hi Gary, I do like this. Bravo also for constructing the poem in the past
tense. Nothing else to say: good one. John
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From: "garydawg" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: 23 December 2001 15:15
Subject: new zip
The gray day disappeared
with the ornament we exchanged
Gary
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Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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