Bob, So much more enterprising and picturesque than
the scarves and traffic-cone hats on Gladstone that I
can recall.
I am not speaking about the subject or the sentiment
but for my taste the last phrase could be smoothed out
a little (eg'the one who sleeps')cheers, cara
--- Bob Cooper <[log in to unmask]> wrote: >
AT THE TREE OF SHOES
> *In Heaton Park, Newcastle* (this line is in
> smaller, slanty, print!)
>
>
> Yet more pairs of DMs, Nikes, Reeboks, hung in the
> branches,
> hoyed there by drunken students – who, too broke for
> taxis,
> too early for Sunday buses, had tied them together,
> swung them,
> then cheered as they stuck, before stumbling further
> home, carolling,
> dancing the beginning of Christmas in their
> stockinged feet -
> where they shine, sway like the shoes slipped off by
> angels
> quietly visiting a stable, not disturbing who’s
> asleep.
>
>
> Bob Cooper
>
> who'd welcome any (all!) comments...
>
>
>
>
>
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