fleeing terrified from the water element into air
Frank, the only bit that bothers me is the water element. An alternative to
that.
I like 'willy.' I like poems that use local words and phrases and Oz is
rich with them.
Thanks.
Gary
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Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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