Arthur, Gary, thank you.
Gary, I like the line break suggestions, but it's a fixed form (triolet) so
I can't really change them.
You're right about the surplus "we" and I've removed it in the amendment
below.
Regards,
David
For George Harrison
You showed the way we all need love,
and love is all. We need
that guiding light, or fear to move.
You showed the way we all need love,
and how some simple songs can prove
abiding friends indeed--
you showed the way. We all need love,
and love is all we need.
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