David, I played with the line breaks and made on simple suggestion.
Music.
Thanks.
Gary
You showed the way
we all need love
and love is all. We need
that compass,
or we fear to move. (no we?)
You showed the way
we all need love,
and how a simple song can prove
a comforter indeed--
you showed the way.
We all need love,
and love is all we need.
November with Janet from Oz at: http://gardawg.homestead.com/homestead.html,
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Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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