>The poem's about the way visual things and the act of making 'art' border
(at certain times) on the mystical - the way the world is full of clues that
become more mysterious the harder we look. Terri, it is a lot like being
stoned and you're right - it is full of longing and I'm not sure what to do
with it. So the question is, if that's what you get from it, does the poem
work? Or do you, as the reader, think 'What on earth's this all about?',
get fed-up and forget it?
yes, it works for me. It works on an emotional level first, which then makes
me want to work out how you did it. That's something which always appeals to
me.
Terri )O(
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